[ddawghurl]

here it is. i did it all with a mouse, do to not having the tablet yet. so, C&C would be greatly appriciated.


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[neff]

good. now start to spend more time for your pictures. when you think its finished, then save it and look at it one day later

This one looks a bit unfinished, but a lot better than your filterpics.
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[ddawghurl]

thanks man. i'm just beginning, so hopefully they will get better, mabey i will put it in the work in progress folder instead.
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[rec|use]

I like your style quite a lot dude

Like NeFF says, it looks a bit unfinished. Liking it so far though

[weaselball2]

yay, without filters!!!

I donno how you got those lines so straight with a mouse...especially the sword

thats actually pretty good with a mouse

[ddawghurl]

[henrik]

Why don't you spend a little bit more time on something like this?
See, you have the anatomy and structure sort of in place, spend a little bit more time with it and I'm sure people will comment. Right now, it's hard for us to give any constructive critique.
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[Tinusch]

I'm loving the figure. It could be rendered a little more cleanly, some semblance of light and shadow could do wonders as well. Did you have any ref for it? Backgrounds are generally a good idea, but if you want to go for the stylized, chaotic type then you need to cover it a little more thoroughly. Have fun with it, use some color, create some texture, etc. A few strokes with a couple different brushes isn't much to look at. And don't forget... we've all got the same brushes you do. It may look cool now, but to a thousand people who use PS every day, it's beginning to taste like a lens flare. Anyway, now that I'm done bitching, I do really like the dynamic figure you've got there.

[ddawghurl]

if you check http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?t=37359, you will see i've made major adjustments, and thanks for the advice.

later.
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