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Hi, I finally subscribe this forum... i saw many really good works and many people who do it better...
i'm italian so plz excuse me for my bad english...
here are my last works:
waiting for crits, see ya!
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:29 pm |
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i thought, with about 200 visits, somebody want to crit my works, even if the crit is bad...
maybe next time my works will be better and somebody will answer my post...
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:39 pm |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:28 pm |
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These are watercolors, correct? You use the medium well in terms of color and texture. But I think that your drawings are too stiff. I don't mean to sound condescending when I ask if you've taken a figure drawing class. Drawing the figure repeatedly (or anything) can do wonders for your line.
The peices look to be small but perhaps you should, if you haven't before, try warming up on huge paper and then working large (A3) with your watercolors. For me, it helps bring out the natural motion of movement in the body that can really make your line come alive. Every joint, from head to toe, is important.
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| Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 11:51 am |
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| WillPalmer wrote: |
These are watercolors, correct? You use the medium well in terms of color and texture. But I think that your drawings are too stiff. I don't mean to sound condescending when I ask if you've taken a figure drawing class. Drawing the figure repeatedly (or anything) can do wonders for your line.
The peices look to be small but perhaps you should, if you haven't before, try warming up on huge paper and then working large (A3) with your watercolors. For me, it helps bring out the natural motion of movement in the body that can really make your line come alive. Every joint, from head to toe, is important.
Will
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yes, they r watercolors... it's strange for me to read that i use well the colors coz these are the first colored things i do...
i've studied in a comics school [just three years, twice in a week for 2 H per day, with rares living drawing lessons...], but i know that i'not so able to draw, even if i think i'm better dreawing than coloring [ ]...
i agree with yu that i should work on larger paper, i know tha drawing in small size is not the better thing...
i do it just for myself, i know i'll never be able to find a job with my capabilities 
tnx for the precious crits,
see ya,
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P.S. plz excuse me for my bad english
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WillPalmer
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| Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 6:54 pm |
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| ...i do it just for myself, i know i'll never be able to find a job with my capabilities... |
You should not consider your capabilities static. Just as who you are changes with time so to do your capabilities. Finding a job in a given discipline or building your ability to the level you aspire to is, as with all of us, a question of determination, discipline, and will power.
And by the way, what country are you from? You're english is strong enough to convey your ideas so don't worry to much about that.
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||STEBO||
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| Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 10:59 pm |
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i'm from RoMe, italy
i know it's just question of practice, discipline, etc... but i have to put this thing between a lot of other things, first of all my job...
by the way, i'll consider all your hints, i hope i'll be back soon with more illustrations,
see ya!!!
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| Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 10:45 pm |
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I like the first one the best. You almost got a William Blake thing going on  |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 4:42 am |
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Hey Stebo,
welcome!
Nice work, you are developing a unique style with those water colours.
Wolverine is really cool fantastic textures in the background.
Have you tried any digital stuff yet?
anyway keep up the good work mate and keep on posting!
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| Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 6:14 am |
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tnx a lot
u can see more from me at www.verbal.altervista.org [one is in the topic THouGHT, at the bottom of the page ]
hoping to be back soon with a couple of works i'm on...
see ya!!!
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