garreta
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 Posted: Mon May 31, 2004 9:13 am |
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This is almost finished. Please, tell me how to improve and what's wrong with this. Even the most exhaustive criticise is welcome, so please, don't be afraid of being rude  |
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flx
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Joined: 27 Mar 2004
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Location: warm, but smoggy brampton, on
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| Posted: Mon May 31, 2004 7:04 pm |
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right clikc the x and go into poperties. copy the link into a new browser window and viola... a phoenix/redpecoc like bird on a fence
garreta. it feels a bit flad.. not enough contrast to my eye. perhaps going darker in the background/ adding a bit more blue to simulate distance. the trees have a good ammount of depth where the hills do not. granted they (the hills) would have alot more reflected light getting into the shadow, but it would give your more depth in my oppintion (uproffessionat/un spelling too)
on second glance, the hiils seem to stop abbruptly. there are 4 easily spotted layers, then sudden, nothing. filling in beyoned the last layer or hills, or even making them less hilly in the distance, will help create more depth
but if u want my take on the piece, i do like it,
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