[neff]

Finally i finished my fantasylike Pic
Tooks me days to draw it, ehrr...
the coloration isnt that good, but i like powerfull colors.



LINEART(big DL): clickelyclick

I think there are still some perspective mistakes,
but what do u think?
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[ceenda]

Looking good NeFF. Very nice details and the overall theme is well realised.

A few things spring to mind though.

- The picture is quite busy. Try looking at it with eyes half-closed. There's a large number of bright intense areas all competing. Sometimes good when doing a pic to think about leading the viewer's eye across the picture. When it's very busy across the picture, it can be hard to know what to pick up on first.

- Depth. The scale of the pixies is quite hard to make out at first glance and it's not immediately obvious (to me, perhaps) that the shelf is quite close to us.

- Perspective. Not my area but the angles in the scene are confusing me a bit.

That said, the detail is lovely. Also, I like the effect on the wings. The pic has a good atmosphere too.

[ittybad]

I like the overall feel of the image; however, you have two focus points (the fairies on the shelf and the person reading). Maybe try having only one focus point, and I would suggest that you use the person reading (maybe make the fairies darker?). Well, just a suggestion, you know more about art than me, I'm sure .
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[Wagner]

yea, i agree with what everybody else said.

I think it would be cool if there was one of the fairys lighting up the book where he is reading it.

[cg]

very interesting use of technique.. i like how you're taking the line art
to a very creative level..

thanks for sharing..

-cg
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[oDD]

that magical mood in this pic is incredible NeFF, good job.
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[neff]

Thx a lot dudes
I'm very happy about all the comments.
You`re right, the light isnt that good like i said
But i am not good enough in coloring too colorize it without
kill the details of the lineart )
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