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Author   Topic : "A sketch done on Painter for a story idea I am workin' on."
StoneEye
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 11:09 am     Reply with quote
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Wagner
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 2:06 pm     Reply with quote
that's pretty spiffy looking. I would make the shading heavier though imo
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StoneEye
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 6:04 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks Wagner for taking the time to crit my stuff! Nice to meet you and I will work on the values more Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 9:12 pm     Reply with quote
I agree a little more contrast would make it stronger. I love writing and art and the mix the two is great combo...maybe a little story hint to get our mouths watering or maybe something the ties the picture to your story
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StoneEye
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 5:58 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for all the feedback. This one is has been difficult for me as the story is has not come easy and so the image may be a bit lacking in content. However, I wanted to show that this dame was in some major trouble and, unless help arrived soon she would be a gonner.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 1:12 pm     Reply with quote
oh your welcome stone eye Rolling Eyes , np.
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