[Psychon]

I'm working on a new website and this is the design that has been most liked so I have a number of versions and would like to see which one people like best. Also if you want to critique the whole logo design feel free, the more input the better.


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[AndyT]

Love the design.

I like the one in the bottom right corner most.
I guess because I can't figure out what the black thing is.
I like the most detailed pencil thingie ... the value seems darker.
It doesn't jump at the viewer like the brighter ones.

I just think it would look better if it wasn't that centered in the circle.
If possible try to move the circle to the left a little more.
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[beginnering]

what I learn in class:
- think of what you 'want to express' with your logo
- brainstorm with a few idea's (for example that aim thingy, or a couple of troopers (example of troopers http://www.vredesaktiekamp.nl/akties/akties1999/soldier2.gif )
- (quick) skecth a few ideas you have in mind
- try to keep your logo as clear as possible. Fancy stuff is nice, but it's got to be clear. People don't want to guess.
- try to keep your text as clean as possible (alignment, space between letters etc.)

what could be handy:
- look for other logo's / styles witch you like and perhaps apply them to yours
- make a 'brainstorm-scheme'

i am no expert at this, I am just a student. There are probably other and better ways to create a logo, but for me it works

good luck

[Psychon]

Thanks for the reply guys. The circle is actually supposed to be a scope, the black thing is an old riffle style sight, and the I is a bullet but i got feedback from a couple of people that it looked like a pen. I updated the image with another color. I truely don't mind if people think it's a pen or a bullet but i might touch it up. As far as the scope some people see it right away and others don't. I'm still trying to think of a way to suggest it's a scope. The newer aim sights don't look as well in the design.
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[ittybad]

I could tell that it was a scope, but it did take a second for me to think it through. If you want to make it look more like a scope, perhapes use a target symbol with the cross-hairs. Just an idea.
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