[K4NN4B15]

This is my first real digital painting and im taking my time with it. its like 25% size best i can do with a free image host. I left the sketch on since it is so small and barely brushed. Im starting to do the sky but there is still time to fix some colors/proportions ect so i would apprechiate any critque.

I plan on doing the sunlight and some saturation/multiply in photoshop again after its brushed so i can maintain the hues

[K4NN4B15]

oh credits--

iMac, wacom, ps7, painter 8, mild altering substances

[hunch]

funny that
the first think i noticed was the cannabis leaf
hehe
i like it even though its abit flat in parts
nice touch with the hair
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[faeklone]

Oh boy, you want this to look real, right, as in correct proportions etc.?

Well, let's start off with the devil head. The main thing is that the horn that curls underneath the eye is malformed compared to the horn on the other side. If they were symetricial, that horn should be facing us head on, or slightly to the left. Also the nose seems a bit flat. You could be meaning for it to be flat, but if not, jsut pull it over to the right a bit more.

YOur cherub seems to be a bit messed up. First of all, his arms are 2 different lengths, his wings are in 2 different styles, the wrist seems to be broken on the left hand side(just draw it as if he has it straight instead of trying to make a wrist action thing going), and I don't think he's quite the right bodytype for a baby like creature. The head is just about right, but when was the last time you saw a jawline on a baby? The rest I'm unsure about, because I'm used to drawing adult figures, but I think the main weight of a baby is around the midsection with the stomach and the butt, and I think a wider chest area would look a bit better.

Alright, the main figure......
Her eyes are a bit big, but that could be for style purposes. Her arm on the left side of the picture is dislocated. It should connect about where the dip in the hair is into her shoulder. The other arm has too much bulk above the shoulder. Make the shoulder square and then taper off into the arm, any extra tilltle bump on the shoulder going into the arm is a little unnessessary. Both hands are unnessessarily huge. The arm on the right side of the picture seems a bit too big, and the elbow should end in a near point. AS always, draw a circle at the joints and draw lines connecting the center of these circles to get the right placement of limbs. In this case it looks like your arm is going one way, and the shoulder is going another. It might work better if you bulk down the arm and the shoulder.

The breasts are an interesting area. Basicially, to make them look nice, get rid of all of the hard black lines between her breasts. They don't function well, and shouldn't be there. Also the line of the breast going to the arm is hight on both sides. Stop the line at roughly the place where it changes direction to go into the arm. Look at symmetry betweent eh two breast, and try and get a similar curve happening on both sides, maybe a bit more defined on the breast on the left side of the picture as it's closer to us.

FRom the ribcage on the left hand side of the picture, to the hip, use two curves. Pull the ribcage out a bit more to the left, and make it join the hip at the place hwere the hip starts. You don't need that intermediary part at the waist, not in this position. That being said, the hip seems to be coming out of her ribs on the other side, but I like how the ribcage is defined on that side. The hip on the left side is nice, but the thigh muscle is defined a little wrong. It is thickest at the midway point on the femer, and not mostly even throughout. So bacisially it makes a lsight cup shape between the thigh and the hip as it transitions from one to the other. This also helps outline the placement of the mons. If that little spt behind her left knee is supposed to be the other leg, it's in the wrong spot. The lower leg can be fixed by running a straight line from the drawing of the knee to the place in the mud where her leg goes in on that side. A stright line, not a curved.

Other than those, really kewl pic and I hope to see it when you're done with it.