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Strawberrysauce
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 Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 3:46 am |
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Did this as a christmas present for a friend who's always wanted to be drawn as a Comic book hero, and loves Wolverine. This is my first attempt at this kinda style. Was looking for feedback on the image in general, and the girl in particular, her raised leg still kinda looks a bit strange to me, any suggestions? The final image will also have Xmen and marvel logos on it.[/img] |
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nexykun
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 6:59 am |
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main crit- her head looks as if its not connected to her body or just too far back on her neck like her neck connects where her chin is
good work tho just fix up some slight fore shortening issues on (her)left arm and i think foreshortening wise the shin would be a little bigger and the energy blast hand seems a little disconnected too
wolverine looks great im a huge marvel fan
not trying to be a jerk just trying to help
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Strawberrysauce
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| Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 9:53 am |
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Not at all, thats what i posted it. Thanks nexykun, you pointed out things i didnt notice at all. but now they seem soo obvious
Ill stick a shadow under the chin to help with the join. Lenghten the shin a bit and try to do something with that back arm. Dono how to solve the disconnection problem on the blast hand, cant see it meself.
Anybody see any other problems?
Cheers, ill post an update soon. |
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Strawberrysauce
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| Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2003 3:56 pm |
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Did some of the suggested changes and think it helps...
Detail, the final image is A3 at 450dpi
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