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allpetter
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 12:17 pm     Reply with quote
I started this one today

up til this point I've spend about 4 efficient hours on it.

This is my first hightech kinda picture which actually might get finished.

cnc definitely welcome
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 1:32 pm     Reply with quote
Tjena

Looks very tight there and I like the color scheme.
One thing though and that is, it�s very difficult to decide what kind of scale the object has. I guess it is supposed to be very big but then the rocks should be very small, like small dots or perhaps just a value.
Maybe you could add some kind of building on the ground which is recognizeable to give the whole thing a different scale, or perhaps a small entrance or a wall around the city, just some ideas to give the right scale.

Looks very cool and I am very curious what you are gonna do next
see you and keep it up
Matthew
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 1:21 pm     Reply with quote
Amen, tjena Matthew! Smile

thanks alot mate, that really helped, gave me a better idea on what this piece should be like. I'll be painting alot of simular elemets which you proposed!

I spend 2 hours on the piece today and this is what came out! Smile



further updates will come...

cnc always welcome
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 1:58 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice pic. Remember the Hippodrome from the teenage mutant nija turtles from, early 90's cartoon. Don't mean to offened you just reminesent rambleings. how about a bit more reflection on the main hull, wrap a some tin foil (dull side out) around a marble and put in some gravel for a ref. And maybe tighten up the edges, something that big seen from that distance has very clean edges. Prehapes some distance moons/suns. Happy hunting...
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 9:12 am     Reply with quote
yea very nice update, I am looking forward to see more updates of this one. :)

Keep it up
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 9:15 am     Reply with quote
Looking VERY slick!! However it looks like its filled with MINI people due to the image doesent look like its very far away. Lightening up the edges as suggested above, or maybe adding more atmosphear between us and the city might help.


I love the detail of the buildings. This is gonna be so slick when its done!!!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 1:43 pm     Reply with quote
or adding atmosphere between the city and those mountians in the bg would definatly make it look bigger!

very slick so fat
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 1:17 pm     Reply with quote
yeah, i definatly agree with all these people, especially CwStone. i also think it would be cool to have it in the middle of the crash by having rock flying up everywhere and towards the camera
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 11:29 am     Reply with quote
wow, this picture is cool. Ive done a similar pic with a huge sphere as a city, but it was nowhere as detailed as yours, keep up the good work
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