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Coldbook
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 2:20 pm     Reply with quote
Hi, tyring to find a style i'm comfortable with in photoshop and thought i'd share the results. Crits welcome.

Having bit of a problem displaying the pic so heres a link

http://www.geocities.com/artostuff/image.htm
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LC3
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 6:13 pm     Reply with quote
Looks like you're on the right track...

I suggest speedpainting! It'll loosen you up!
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FallDamage
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 7:01 pm     Reply with quote
I think it's really great, and worth devolping further. The best part is the creature in the foreground, and how it contrasts with what I presume to be it's master. Anyway, I feel obligated to come up with some sort of crit, even though your art is better than mine, so if I had to choose something, it'd be the monster's shoulder- it seems a bit too round and pumpkin-esque and just catches my eye as being odd. Anyway, I may be wrong, and your art is great, so nuts to me.
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Coldbook
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 12:03 am     Reply with quote
Don't down yourself like that. Thank you for the crit and i will develope it further, and take a look at the shoulder. After looking at the the original drawing you're right it is pumpking-eske, its also much to big. Cheers.
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