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Coldbook junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2003 Posts: 23 Location: uk
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 2:20 pm |
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Hi, tyring to find a style i'm comfortable with in photoshop and thought i'd share the results. Crits welcome.
Having bit of a problem displaying the pic so heres a link
http://www.geocities.com/artostuff/image.htm _________________ Bonza |
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LC3 member
Member # Joined: 16 Feb 2003 Posts: 65 Location: Atlanta, GA, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 6:13 pm |
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Looks like you're on the right track...
I suggest speedpainting! It'll loosen you up! |
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FallDamage member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2003 Posts: 474 Location: Canada
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 7:01 pm |
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I think it's really great, and worth devolping further. The best part is the creature in the foreground, and how it contrasts with what I presume to be it's master. Anyway, I feel obligated to come up with some sort of crit, even though your art is better than mine, so if I had to choose something, it'd be the monster's shoulder- it seems a bit too round and pumpkin-esque and just catches my eye as being odd. Anyway, I may be wrong, and your art is great, so nuts to me. |
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Coldbook junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2003 Posts: 23 Location: uk
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 12:03 am |
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Don't down yourself like that. Thank you for the crit and i will develope it further, and take a look at the shoulder. After looking at the the original drawing you're right it is pumpking-eske, its also much to big. Cheers. _________________ Bonza |
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