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gamerplus
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 Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2003 12:11 pm |
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Hello this is a finished sketch i did of a girl...tell me how i can improve it thanks   sorry if the scan looks bad  |
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Chthonic Divinity
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2003 12:29 pm |
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i thought pants like that were out of style in '99 
its nice though, looks fine for that style. you should probably work on cloth folds though. and the neck and legs look a bit long |
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Frode
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2003 12:34 pm |
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Gravity pulls the trouwsers down... so there should be more cloth on the ground. So only near the ground should the folds be horizontal, halfway the trouwsers they should be vertical, I think.
You seem to be trying to create some extreme perspective, but it doesn't go al to the top of the drawing... only her legs got the perspective. And her arms should be a bit longer. |
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gamerplus
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2003 1:02 pm |
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if u post that my perspective are off or the folds in the clothes are wrong please tell me how i can fix it.I want my art to be as good as possible. It will be greatly appreciated. Thanks
sorry if i sound angry  |
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