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tbone28
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 6:59 pm     Reply with quote
C and C Please



Thanks
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 9:18 pm     Reply with quote
This is pretty nice reminds me of d&d illustrations

few of my own thoughts on this:

* dont brighten shadows... just makes it look muddy
* large black space.. do something with it
* make horns shinier.. more finished
* grass needs work
* I don't like monochrome as much as colors
* work on his hand/claws
* make him more threatening or more loveable

These are just my thoughts on it.

I did a "paint over". I didn't go to the trouble of using my tablet. I wasn't really able to fix a lot with this. You might not even like it as well. The main thing that need work on is the black space, the monochrome colors,, imo.

anyway.. here it is

http://light1.home.mindspring.com/copies/paint_overs/paint_over.jpg

I was working on the mountains when I got bored. Try adding some more texture like rough texture to the background.

Again these are just my own thoughts on how Id probaby do things. Anyway, I was bored. I will go back to painting myself soon.

Nice work.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 3:55 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for taking the time to do the paint over. Very cool. Thanks for the critz. I really appreciate them.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 3:57 am     Reply with quote
shaper edges! please Smile

and the metal dude... if he's metal, he won't be reflecting white... he'd be reflecting the blue of the sky and the red of the dragon... and if he's not metal, he wouldn't be reflecting so much Wink
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