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Topic : "feudal future kinght female (WIP skech updated)." |
maxetormer member
Member # Joined: 14 Dec 2002 Posts: 259 Location: M�xico
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 1:59 am |
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This is and idea i had this afternoon, some kind of futuristic-cyborg female knigt (one of her arms is mechanic) like a templar knigth on the future =)
I kinda needed to draw someting on medieval time, but i wanted some sifi too so this is what my head cooked up =)
commets and opinions on this image more than wellcome as usual.
I prolly will color it but i wanna hear some opinions first =) see ya =)
i am working on her this one it is old but ill get to finish it a soon as i can
i better put here the most updated pic i have:
 _________________ Never underestimate the stupidity of the human race.Sorrow is the contrast of happines then sorrow is some how the esence of happiness + = 
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Jost junior member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2001 Posts: 28 Location: canada
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 4:28 am |
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Even if she is a cyborg it would give great appeal to the character if she had more accurate anatomical features.
The only other thing that snags my eye is her belt around her skirt should tension the material more on her left side.
Perhaps when finished the background will be more appealing but as I see it now this image would look better if the items in the background were closer to the main character but this would turn the image vertical.
Hopes my two cents helped,
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mOO member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 1999 Posts: 84 Location: Iowa
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 3:12 pm |
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If you can make the legs a bit longer they look really short right now. |
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maxetormer member
Member # Joined: 14 Dec 2002 Posts: 259 Location: M�xico
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2003 7:35 pm |
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mOO: yup u are right the legs look some how off (dunno why did not realize of that, he he thanks for the heads up)
Jost: your two cents are very apreciated (yeah the bakg. will be like a very dark sea with stormings clousd but now i decided to make the format less horizontal.
This is the last sckech i did of the felmale knight, (i hope that now she has a more acurated anothomical features.) commets and opinions as usual are wellcome, this is an in progress skech i will clean up the lines some more to finish up the details on the armor, and the robotical arm.
constructive commets and opinions are as usual very much wellcome
thanks for the feedback
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maxetormer member
Member # Joined: 14 Dec 2002 Posts: 259 Location: M�xico
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2003 8:46 pm |
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this is some detailing on the caracter i problably will make some small diferent compsitions before i do the painting to find a compostion that looks real good
what do u guys think of the caracter so far?
see ya
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Iddi member
Member # Joined: 14 Jun 2003 Posts: 64 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2003 2:36 pm |
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I think those shades are a bit too intence. At least some of them (i.e. the face, neck and chest. _________________ The truth hurts. Sure not as much as jumping onto your bike with the seat missing, but it hurts. |
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