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spline
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 Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 2:48 am |
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Was not shure I wanted to post this because I�m not happy with it. And I spent so long time on it...But I�ll post it anyway.
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Critical Pete
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 4:45 am |
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| Hmm... It's very well rendered... But I'm not happy with it either. But... I guess you could turn this around and say it's meant to be the way it is on purpose. It really makes me wanna punch the kid in the face ( not that I really would, but if she accidentally got punched in the face by a giant comic boxing glove I can't say I wouldn't laugh ). Interactive art... It really brings forth a lot of emotion and such... |
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Khaifin
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 2:17 pm |
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| i think its still reaaallly good. i love the colors in the face |
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eyalyab
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 3:32 pm |
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the colors are too intense for me, but i guess that's the style you were aiming for here.
i think her left cheek needs adjusting as it makes her face look distorted, or as critical pete put it.. funch in the face worthy. =] |
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jr
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 7:31 pm |
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i would whiten the whites of the eyes alittle more , i know in the photo it was darker but i think it would look better if you whiten it a tad.
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CarRyoN
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2003 10:58 am |
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It was simply too tempting 
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