[Khaifin]

updated*

[eyalyab]

uhm.. you have to write something.

//i like the cloth folds

[Khaifin]

sorry, its work in progress of course, its of the canannite god ba'al aka the 1st Goetic demon bael. doin the painting just becuase.

[Tinusch]

I really like the texture you have on that snake, but the rest of the painting needs some structure. The bodies and heads are too amorphous, you need to lay down some solid planes and really define their shapes, because it all looks a little too "blobby" right now, if you know what I mean. Whip those things into shape. I also think the dark subject matter would call for some more dramatic lighting.

[Khaifin]

pray tell, how would i go about this? its mostly polygonlasso/dodge/burn/smudge

seriously, im open to suggestions

keep in mind though, that this is a ghastly entity, a chiseled face was not my intentions.