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maxetormer
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This the next beast.-eviromet i wanna do , it is gonna be a cave kinda of beast, named Grotum (Grotto) this the ligthing scketh for the digital painting, feedback as usual is very usefull  see ya
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 5:37 pm |
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I like it!
It's kinda hard to figure out what's going on in the bottom left corner though.
Is there a part of the other leg? Well maybe colors will help ...
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 5:53 pm |
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I have added some texture on the backgroud i think this has helped on the leg issue thanks for the feedback Andy i am glad u like ti
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 5:58 pm |
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I'm an incredibly bad artist and a relative newcomer to these forums, so you kinda have to take everything I say with a grain of salt.
I don't know, but I think his left foot seems to be at an odd angle. The cliff itself that its standing on seems to be almost parallel to the screen which seems to make the left foot look awkward. I most likely have no clue what I'm talking about, but thats what I see. |
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maxetormer
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 6:46 pm |
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don�t worry it is your ablitiy to see things that i can�t see what i look up on this forums, i am just an art studet trying to improve, so any feedback usually is very usefull cause i stop beenig objetive after some hours of work
( i have seen what u mean i fixed (i hope) the feet and the inclination of the clift )
thanks so much to all for takeing the time to post
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 7:08 pm |
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Looks good, I think the new perspective is better. Now, my next comment is purely taste and what I think makes more sense to me.
I think the nails/claws on the foot seems a bit odd. This is where I start assuming things. I'm trying to picture this thing walking around in a dark cavern or cave or something like that and I think it would be awkward to walk with long, straight claws like that. Studying dinosaurs and other animals, the claws/nails on feet tend to be shorter and/or curled. |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 7:34 pm |
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once again i agree with ya, so i have changed the proportion of the feet and claws a bit thanks so much for all the feedback =)
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