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chalcara
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 8:54 pm     Reply with quote
Hello! Since I droped in here without further warning, I thought I should post my latest (and best till yet) artwork.



What do you thing about her? Comments and Critiques are warmly welcome. I try hard to improve.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 10:16 pm     Reply with quote
Just a swift comment here, what screamed out at me the most when first looking at the image: texture. The fur looks really nice, the texture is quite well done, except there is one problem. Everything in the image looks furry. You've got the candles looking like they have that fur texture, the floors, and even the backdrop. If you gave them a different texture I think this one could look really stunning.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 6:20 am     Reply with quote
nice mood.. I feel that.

but the body looks haired so I hope that it will not burn up by candles which are soo near the body..

try make that more free space around the body and make the background more clean..

then try add colours if you have energy and time. .it would be nice experience.. the lightning looks right as far
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chalcara
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:09 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for your comments. Smile

She's a windmage; she won't burn herself. It's more like an exercise for her power... It's the same thing like Yogis (sp?) sitting on a needle board.

Yes, I'm going to colour this one soon, and I'll clean up the background the background first. To be honest I didn't consider it as a problem until now. Any ideas how to make the candles less "furry" without loosing the painterly look?
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:27 am     Reply with quote
is that a furry? looks good, would look great with color. the drawing though is impecable. and it looks like a furry, but then again some people dont know what that is. lol

critique, nothing. looks great.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:39 am     Reply with quote
Hmm, it's an anthromorphic feline - yup, I think she's qualified to be a furry. But originally she's a member of an alien race, similiar to the Kzins in Ringworld.

Thanks, illOgic. Smile
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