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chalcara junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Jun 2003 Posts: 4
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 8:54 pm |
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Hello! Since I droped in here without further warning, I thought I should post my latest (and best till yet) artwork.
What do you thing about her? Comments and Critiques are warmly welcome. I try hard to improve.
*chalcara* |
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Gothic Gerbil member
Member # Joined: 10 Jul 2000 Posts: 237 Location: Ooltewah, Tennessee, USA
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2003 10:16 pm |
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Just a swift comment here, what screamed out at me the most when first looking at the image: texture. The fur looks really nice, the texture is quite well done, except there is one problem. Everything in the image looks furry. You've got the candles looking like they have that fur texture, the floors, and even the backdrop. If you gave them a different texture I think this one could look really stunning. _________________ "Me? I'm a pop idol."
"It is pitch dark. You are likely to be eaten by a grue." |
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Tomasis member
Member # Joined: 19 Apr 2002 Posts: 813 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 6:20 am |
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nice mood.. I feel that.
but the body looks haired so I hope that it will not burn up by candles which are soo near the body..
try make that more free space around the body and make the background more clean..
then try add colours if you have energy and time. .it would be nice experience.. the lightning looks right as far _________________ out |
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chalcara junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Jun 2003 Posts: 4
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:09 am |
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Thanks for your comments.
She's a windmage; she won't burn herself. It's more like an exercise for her power... It's the same thing like Yogis (sp?) sitting on a needle board.
Yes, I'm going to colour this one soon, and I'll clean up the background the background first. To be honest I didn't consider it as a problem until now. Any ideas how to make the candles less "furry" without loosing the painterly look? |
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illOgic junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2003 Posts: 23 Location: the abyss
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:27 am |
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is that a furry? looks good, would look great with color. the drawing though is impecable. and it looks like a furry, but then again some people dont know what that is. lol
critique, nothing. looks great. _________________ illOgic |
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chalcara junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Jun 2003 Posts: 4
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2003 9:39 am |
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Hmm, it's an anthromorphic feline - yup, I think she's qualified to be a furry. But originally she's a member of an alien race, similiar to the Kzins in Ringworld.
Thanks, illOgic.  |
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