Yuri
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 Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2003 8:22 am |
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Very nice pix. 
Her breast that's not so visible should be curvier. Also, it looks like part of it is missing and it should be closer to her neck. I think it would help if you tried tracing out the breast that's covered on the reference pix to get a better idea of its' shape. Even though she's lifting her hips, therefore depressing her upper body, her breast shouldn't be so flat.
Her eye level is a little off.
Her hand that's resting on her hip should be less slanted but not as straight as in the reference pix, to accomodate to her modified posture.
Finally, her legs. I'm not sure whether there's a space between them or something 'cos the sand is almost blending together with her skin color(which I'm not sure whether it's done intentionally but it does make things a little hard to see).
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