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merlyns
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to kick off.
(maybe I'll color this anyone suggestions???)
I'm not really in to manga/anime anymore but this time I wanted to do some again.
I'll be posting more soon.
-david
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| Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2003 12:38 pm |
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I love it. More anime women I say!  |
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merlyns
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| Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2003 1:48 pm |
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tossmonkey: thanks for replying. 
a quicky I did tonight -not happy with it. I totaly messed up the hands, shading is off ..etc
it took me about 30-40 minutes to do this.
next time I wanna do something more realistic for sketching
-david
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| Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 12:22 pm |
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messed up or not,
thats a killer shirt design. damn sexy!
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| Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 2:13 pm |
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The second would look much better with a few corrections. Clean up the line work, and add some line weight. Make the chin a bit less pointy (stylistic choice, but what you have looks Wrong to me). Work on the leg anatomy a bit. Reference for that pose should be easy to find, google is your friend. And last, it's OK if the hair covers up the eyes a bit so that we can't see all of them. I promise.
The lighting looks good, pat yourself on the back for having a consistant lightsource. A bit more contrast wouldn't hurt. |
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merlyns
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| Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 10:10 pm |
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tek9z: thanks -- I needed to do some more different designs on women so I thought why not go a sexy-eer direction.
Drew: Thanks for those comments there much needed indeed. I'll work them in to my new sketches.
-david
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merlyns
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| Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2003 10:42 pm |
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here is a new one.
I did it OC last night, I didn't want to go to dark with the shading and stuff so it may appeer a bit to light.
I think it was 40 minutes work.
-david
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