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Guy Spenzz
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 Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 8:18 pm |
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ok ive posted several times before but nothing complete. and this is the first thing I think I can call complete, because im not going to work on it any further, mainly because it was no longer fun to do so it defeated the perpose. well Ive never made any backrounds before this and Ive only colored 4 things before this. it is all basactly a learning experience. c&c welcome.  |
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Eelco de Vlieger
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2003 12:05 am |
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Hi Guy Spenzz,
It's a nice idea, but I think it needs a few adjustments. I'll give two tips you can keep in the back of your mind when you make another image (since you don't want to work on this one anymore).
1: Smoke is 3D too... give it some depth. And it looks like the guns are on fire, too much smoke I think.
2: His hips are too small, now it looks as if he's about to fall backwards.
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Guy Spenzz
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2003 4:30 pm |
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than you Eelco,
1. good point, dont know why I didnt think of that. I originaly had less smoke but I couldnt see it so I piled in alot more.
2.the stlye has some to do with that, but im reading more into anatomy and I dont think im gonna stick with this exact style, im gonna mess with it some and ill keep in mind about the hips |
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