[maxetormer]

This is a caracter on mine his name is Amgod i need some tips to make the final ligththing adjustments to make the lansdcape as realist as posible, any kinda of constructive sugesstions are wellcome

I love criitics see ya


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[SpiralEye]

Okay, first impression--those clouds and that angle are , well, pretty cool.

Things that might use improvement--Landscape elements get paler and less saturated the further away they are.

Two cents.

[maxetormer]

okas will change that i mean the saturation and i will post the changes thanks! i am glad u liked the angle
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[maxetormer]

I lowered the saturation of the background mountains and i added some detail to the landscape and clouds i still feell I am missing something but i can not find what it is.

help please

more ideas critiitcs paint overs anything



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[McKack]

Nice man. I'm no pro but maybe if you added a bit haze like on this quick little paintover? you decide:

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[maxetormer]

yup i like it !!!
the fog u used make the enviroment more alive
I will make the changes and re-post a new vesion later, thanks a bunch man
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[McKack]

Glad I could help
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[Anthony]

Hey man, nice start. The thing that hurts the piece most isn't the mountains - its the lighting. It doesn't seem to be consistent throughout the piece. Where's the sun? In the forground character, the shadows from him put the sun above him. The shading on his calves put it on the left. The lighting on the lower right part of his ride puts it on the right. And the BG puts it alternately in the rear left or forground left. Think in terms of the shapes first, figure out how the light will behave on those shapes, then render. *buurrp* Oops, excuse me, that always happens when I regurgitate something Spooge and Fred and others have tried to drill into me. =P
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[maxetormer]

okas u are rigth i did not realized how screwed up my ligths were i will re-do some things on the pic and re post changes during this weekend thanks a buch for takening the time to examine my image and for pointing to me my mistakes, i will fix �em ( i wanna make this image rigth) thanks
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[maxetormer]

this a quick ligth sckech

Is this more ligth cosistent?
i like if u could correct this new ligth setup Anthony i like ur previous corrections a lot.

the ligths now comes from above left, any commets about it are more than apresiated (i think the lights looks better) commets opinions any thing are more than wellcome



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[maxetormer]

[Anthony]

Looking better man! Don't be afraid to push the lighting. Push it farther than I have here if you like, just have fun with it. Strong directional lighting like this will cause hard shadows and high contrast. That means lower numbers of highly saturated colors for the most part.

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[maxetormer]

This is the lastest changes i have made, i defined the clouds quite a bit more increasted the shading contrast and i cleaned up the picture overrall.

I thinks it is allmost finishied
(do a picture is never finished �cause there is always room for improvment he he )

comments opinions and suggestions as usual are more than wellcome and Anthony and McKack thanks both of u for all the ideas to improve my pic i really learned quite a few things about lights with this picture.


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[UkiTakuMuki]

i love it!!!11 Verrrrrry nice ^^

[maxetormer]

Thanks man i like ur work too as well u have very good dominion on ur ligths I am glad u liked my robot
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