[silverrrspoon]

Hobla,

this is the final piece of her...it think.
C&C are very wellcome!



Here is an earlier stage of the work.



Thanks

[Matthew]

Hey
I like this one very much. Is it charcoal with gouchae? or is it digital?

Keep it up
Matthew

[antipro]

wow, that is beautiful. i love the lost edges you've used, it gives a very romantic feel to the entire piece. your anatomy looks good, the cello is also well done.. the only thing i might suggest is some darker values in the figure? to me the cello seems a lot more contrasty, and is standing out more as the subject of the drawing.. if that's the case then nevermind. otherwise, awesome work

erik

[silverrrspoon]

thank you guys. Defenitely consider darkening some areas of her skin. Allthough the cello is much more solid and darker than her skin, but will think of something. The thing why it looks (the skin) much paler, is that I didnt use that strong lines. Any suggestions, how to deal the thing? You are right, antipro. The cello defenitely jumps too much out of the picture, even it's the main subject, but so is the girl (girls are allways )

This one made with photoshop 7 I just love it's new brush thingos. There were use of few references.

Should I paint some dress for her (so she doesnt have to play in nude )? Also though to give some directions of her right arm, but dont know, what do you think?

Thanks again

Robert

[Capt. Fred]

Maybe yu could bring her face into the foreground by making her non-paper coloured. I.e., try making her face lighter, probably not darker. Not lighter in general but render her head using lighter shades. Paint light instead of shodow from now one maybe? I dunno.

[silverrrspoon]

Hellou,

I painted more white tones on her skin. How do you like her now, any better? I think, yes she looks now better. Thank you guys

[Eelco de Vlieger]

HI silverrrspoon,

The image looks very nice. But there are two things I would change: I would define the forehead more and tighten the strings.