[blammo]

well I'm new here
and I'm 15 years old, so please be nice

this was a drawing I drew lately





and somebody colored it
I didn't color it!
I suck at coloring:D




please give me some C&C

blammo

[AndyT]

I think the image is kinda confusing. The colored version work better.
You could read about composition. Maybe check out the Loomis Books.

Try to seperate foreground, middleground and background better.
You can try shading the the objects.
Maybe you don't want to do that because it's harder to color the lineart later?
Well the lines are too stong then. Do a search for line weight maybe.

Or check out Mr. T's (Lung_bug's) sketchbook at conceptart.org
... there are some images that show how he works.
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