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Ritaku
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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2003 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
well this is what i came up with for school. (A-levels, Media studies subject). i'll just show it without explanations for now, that way i can get responses of what people see in the picture. please any comments will be appreciated. i've never really tried making an image like this (i tend to like just Cging things and doing about shading on clothes etc).



voila! shoulda seen some of the previous incomplete versions... eww
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2003 10:11 pm     Reply with quote
Just a quick critique: there's too much "space" in the top half of the image, and the text on the tombstone is too difficult to read. I think you could fix both problems at once by making that tombstone text take up a lot more of the space it has available.
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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2003 11:38 pm     Reply with quote
I have to agree with sumaleth on that but its nicely done.

-david
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Matthew
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2003 2:28 am     Reply with quote
Ahh I remember that movie, nice stuff. Not sure about the purple color thou.

good work
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