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Rorsh
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2003 1:01 pm     Reply with quote


Detail shot
http://www.polycount.com/cottages/rorshach/pimp/soldiers_detail.jpg

C&C welcome.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2003 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
wow. really nice. reminds me of the game im playing- medal of honor.
a few things you should look into:
the left most soldier is holding his gun at the metal instead of the wood part. i dont know how critical that is in the painting, but in reality his hand will burn ;]
the right most soldier (with the big chin)- his colors are too faded. as a result of this he looks like he's further back then you probably want him to be.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2003 12:36 am     Reply with quote
the weapons are also to small. What year are u trying for? I think you should continue workinging on it... it looks good though Very Happy
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Sightunseen
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2003 9:31 am     Reply with quote
I like this piece alot, the colors are fantastic, but as eyalab said, the right-most soldier does look very faded.

Also, I can tell what era you were going for because of the weapons, just a gaze I can see a BAR, an M1 Carbine, Thompson, and I think it's an M1 Garand, obviously meaning this is World War 2, correct?
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