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syco26
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This pic is going to be my entry for the Monster Fight comp at House of the Dead Forum.I would just like some c&c on it before I complete it.Franky and the two side profiles are complete(I think) and the monster next to Franky is nearly finished.Do you think the pic works at all or is it shocking?Please let me know what you think.
Thanks in advance.
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CwStone
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2003 10:40 am |
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Nice! The side profiles look great, along with franky, except i think he could maybe use a little more detail. The one u say is almost finished looks mad cool and i would also suggest more detail, but, like u said, it aint finished yet so u were probably gonna do that anyway.
one more thing about the unfinished ones in the foreground. I think it wuld look mad kool if u could darken them and put a nice bright edge light across them. Edge lighting looks mad cool. But thats just my opinion.
cant wait to see it finished!
ps, are all those guys ganging up on franky or somethin?
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2003 5:13 pm |
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i think technically it looks good... but i dont seem to get any feeling of tension or combat here! the monsters dont look threatening, because frankenstein doesnt look threatened... ??
he looks sorta over-calm and composed for this sorta scene.. give him some rage!!! ;p
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syco26
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| Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 3:39 am |
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Thank you CwStone and UkiTakuMuki very much for your replies.
CwStone Franky was finished but know after reading your reply I think I will throw some more detail in it to fit in with the two side profiles.The two in the forground where going to get the same treatment as the rest dark and a nice orange glow.Thanks again.
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UkiTakuMuki he is not supposed to look threatened as he isn't he is thinkig "These guys are fucked if they think they can fuck with me" But like you said
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I think that is what I'm missing.He needs to be saying "I'M THE MAN AND THESE GUYS ARE FUCKING DEAD IF THEY THINK THEY CAN FUCK WITH ME" He needs a big frown and a snarl.Or a smerk?Thanks again for the reply it is greatly appreciated.
Any one else?
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| Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:33 am |
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Hey UkiTakuMuki is Franky any better like this.And any one else have any thoughts?
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