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EL Chief junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2003 Posts: 24 Location: germany
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 8:22 am |
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hi. latest try getting my personal color and contrast proplem done. well, it seems to me, this will not be my last one
c&c welcome
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merlyns member
Member # Joined: 30 May 2002 Posts: 524 Location: the netherlands -_-
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 8:44 am |
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o really nice the concept is great and the colors you've chosen are lovely.
now for the crits:I think you could work on the clouds some more they seem to be unfinished and vage.
the water should cast some reflectiion colors of the sky a bit, just try adding a bit bleu and green.
the lady infrond could use some detail.
okay I admite being allitle nitpicken, but hay I like the picture.
good work I'd like to see much more from you!
-david _________________
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the_insider member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2002 Posts: 547 Location: DENVER COLORADO--rocky mountains whoo hoo!!
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 4:44 pm |
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awesome---i really love the cliff...look into SHAUN TAN...you'd probably like his work---very good piece---work with the waterfall a bit though _________________ www.andresguzman.com
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EL Chief junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2003 Posts: 24 Location: germany
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 2:53 am |
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thanks dudes.
@merlyns
you're right. i added some colors to the water. the lady and the clouds have to wait, because i lack of time right now.
@the insider
thx, do you have an URL of Shaun Tan?
greets & keep working  |
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