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EL Chief
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 8:22 am     Reply with quote
hi. latest try getting my personal color and contrast proplem done. well, it seems to me, this will not be my last one Laughing
c&c welcome

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 8:44 am     Reply with quote
o really nice the concept is great and the colors you've chosen are lovely.

now for the crits:I think you could work on the clouds some more they seem to be unfinished and vage.
the water should cast some reflectiion colors of the sky a bit, just try adding a bit bleu and green.
the lady infrond could use some detail.

okay I admite being allitle nitpicken, but hay I like the picture.

good work I'd like to see much more from you!

-david
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 4:44 pm     Reply with quote
awesome---i really love the cliff...look into SHAUN TAN...you'd probably like his work---very good piece---work with the waterfall a bit though
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EL Chief
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 2:53 am     Reply with quote
thanks dudes.

@merlyns
you're right. i added some colors to the water. the lady and the clouds have to wait, because i lack of time right now.

@the insider
thx, do you have an URL of Shaun Tan?

greets & keep working Very Happy
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