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Bare Bonez · Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2003 2:26 pm

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One Love baby!

Crits/Comments welcome.
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marcuslm · Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2003 6:25 pm

Very nice. I love the expression on his face.

Duracel · Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2003 8:32 pm

The face looks a little bit "cuttet out".

*take the legend-CD out of the cupboard*

Well, and the colors could be a bit more saturated.
And, the nose is too lon and his chin to short.
And well, see on the orignal-photo, his face isnt right in the center, but a little bit to the right to give a bit space to where he is loooking.

Overall a good portr�t of a great charakter. Smile

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merlyns · Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2003 10:49 pm

very nicely done.

but I see some errors in proportians his eyes arent lined out and they are to far of eachother, some more about the eyeslids, one eyelid is a wee bit higher that the other..

sorry bout my nitpicks...

I think you did a wonderful job on the shading and adding color becouse dark skin colors are very hard to do, atleast, that's mine experince.

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Bare Bonez · Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2003 8:37 am

oh this brings me to tears! Someone commented and I'm so happy!! Thanks dudes. I'm inspired to try again! Embarassed

Question though: What do you mean by more saturated colours? How do I saturate colours?

The next painting I want to try out the oils tool, but how does one blend oils? What tool do you use?

I'm a poor guy and use painter classic.
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