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tilokani
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 Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2003 6:53 pm |
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I don't know what to say about this one. I don't think it looks all that good. Any constructive crits would be much appreciated.
BTW:: those are feathers for her eyebrows, not hair...she's not a unibrowed beast.
Here's the reference I used. I'm not trying to make that girl exactly, cause she' not as bootylicious as I'd like. But just the idea.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/1452867
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Giant Hamster
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| Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2003 7:48 pm |
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I slid some stuff around with the Free Transform tools in photoshop....
possibly a fix?
Pretty much just what I felt looked more correct. =P
EDIT: Maybe I should explain what I did...that'd be constructive, heh:
I moved the breast/chest area up -because it was quite low.
Made the neck not so thick looking and gave used the copy-tool to just copy some of that hair behind there like you can see the back of hair behind her.
Changed the nose ever so slightly.
Moved the jawline up and the lips down, and made the slips slightly smaller.
the rest was just fine.
I like the eyes a lot - and they're lined up very well, someting I notice people mess up on a lot! =)
Wheeeeeeeeeeeee, now finish it! |
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