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Finer
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I dont do much lineart, but here is a try at it. 2 hours in photoshop without reference
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Popeye
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 3:07 pm |
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nice drawing! i especially like the torso, that's pretty neat.
some critics though, i think her hands'(fists') gesture is a little less graceful compares to her body. since her left fist is slightly tilting, i think it will look better if u put the sowrd in perspective.
overall it looks good. |
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 3:08 pm |
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Absolutely beautiful man, as is most of your work. 
Only thing that jumps out at me crit-wise is her breast and that strong/pronounced line down the middle of her sternum. I'd suggest you lighten or remove the line and move the nipple on her left breast more towards the middle of it. Also, her left breast is higher than her right, maybe lower it slightly...
Anyways, other than that, it's wonderful. I love her legs, great stuff for no reference. Keep up the good work brotha.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 7:27 am |
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Very nice ...
looks so good ..
can you make a color version full rendered ?
nice image !!
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 2:07 pm |
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Mmm I love the linework. Very confident and neat. Are you going to colour it?
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 3:25 pm |
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No reference huh? Wow. 
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 10:19 pm |
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| Anders -- this is looking great! Little parts like skin on the straightened knee, etc really impresses the hell out of me for no-ref material. Amazing work. Keep it up! |
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jerO
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| Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 10:29 pm |
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Very nice work.
the one thing that's bugging me is the buckler.
with the angle of her hand, the shield's position doesn't look plausable.
one crit in a really beautiful drawing |
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