[Markus Schille]

Just finished this one (I hope). Have worked on it for several days now, and theres always something to fix! I tried to get sort of an Anime style on this painting. It's done in Painter (mostly), and it's only the second time I try to do something serious in Painter...

The composition is maybe a little boring, but it's supposed to have text on both sides and a logo at the top, and its going to be cropped heavily to A4 format, I just added a lot of extra space.

So tell me what you think?? Could I have done something differently, or better. Is it anything you like/don't like??


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Markus Schille

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[tom!]

its very nice ^^...
umm I'd make alot of it less harsh in the shading/blending of colours...
in some parts, it may need to be blended better.
the clouds need to be blurred, the drag some atention away, and I'm pretty sure clouds don't look as hard as that.,...
her ass looks like its getting abit too big, maybe the angle, but it looks odd compared to the legs.
her eyes bother me... I'm not exactly sure why.... maybe because they remind me of a realy crappy teacher I had once.... I'm not too sure ^^;
oh and if your going to have it in, I'd make the earing abit less hair colour... (if that is an earing)
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[Soak]

If she would have long hair and a thinner arse she would be really sexy

I like

[faeklone]

man, i go to school with a girl that looks exactly like that.

[Kamal]

I would crop it and give her a glamour glow. Kind of like those effects you see in the old black and white movies, where they'd shoot the image through wax filters.

If you're not going to crop it then you need to fix the pelviz. It's too short, her crotch needs to go further down.

I really like the nicely rendered camera and butterfly. I think that's the tightest part of the image.

[zap.br]

very very nice ..
i love the butterfly in camera ...


sweet girl
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[Markus Schille]

Thanks, Ill keep your comments in mind. Maybe I'll fix some of the issues later , but I won't give her long hair or make her thinner (I think those parts are fine as they are). And I like to keep it a little rough and not smudge out all the brush strokes. Does everyone disagree? But I might try to work on the pelvis a little. If not I'll keep it in mind for next time!
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[zenonithus]

That looks good. I really like the colours. Though I think Kamal's soft focus look and crop suits the content more.

[Aloys]

really magically!

Aloys