[jakub]

hi,
im working on a kind of selfportrait... now, i've been sitting on it too long yet!
can you just criticize the face (this isthe part that is quite finished, the rest follows then)
and i need some advise how to make that jacket look realistic (folds, leather)

thank you!


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[dontfallin]

I would work on the nose and upper lip first...it also looks like you have elf ears

[jakub]

oh right, i forgot to mention that. it is not exactly how i look like
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[CwStone]

The nose looks kinda flat...i suggest bringing it out so that the outside edge of it lines up with the bottom of the eye. I also think u should make the little inlet that connects the nose and upper lip less shadowed. I think it stands out too much.
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