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Awetopsy
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 Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 2:45 pm |
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Just in time for the valentines....
hope you like
original is 3000x2250 so wallpaper versions are possible if anyone wants.
all photoshop 6.01. Not sure how long, been working on it in spurts for the last few days... probably a few hours.. maybe 6.
crits and comments welcome. (as always) |
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Basement bound
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| Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 3:59 pm |
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Hey -tops well done. I especially like the area around the hip. Otherwise, I am just bitter about FEB. 14.
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ZippZopp
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| Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 8:32 pm |
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| looks good, although i think she should be leaning forward a little more, looks like she might tip back. i like the style here, good work. i'm gonna have to side with basement, i'm bitter about feb 14 |
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Rhomb
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| Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2003 2:32 pm |
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I like. Very nice and sexy. You asked for crits... there is something bothering me in her face, mainly in the mouth area and the brow (well, maybe not so much the brow but the mouth.). I made a small overpaint to show what I would do
Also, I would check the line weights on the figure and use more clearly thicker line on the objects that are closer and thinner line for the farther away ones. Now they look just a little inconsistent. Just my two cents. Otherwise good work, very crisp and clean. 
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Malachi Maloney
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Tue Feb 11, 2003 9:11 am |
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hey all.. thanx for the comments
ZippZopp: I dont see it.. I tried to keep the weight distribution correct.. maybe my untrained eye isnt seeing what you are.. but thanx for the comment.. Ill continue to keep weight distribution in mind.
Rhomb: hey thanx for the crit. Now that you mention it..I think the brow is a little high. I appreciate your idea for the mouth, thanx for illustrating it.
With regards to the linewheight thing, yeah you caught me, Im still learning proper linweight. Good eye. Ill keep that in mind in the future.
Malachi: thanx!!!
Ive made a few changes to the image, I changed the blue backlight to a more subtle and warm yellow.. and Ive changed the position of the background heart... I think the image is overall better now:
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