[topeira]

i have been trying to get a lil cartoony style done lately and i did a coulpe of things in that different way.
i was wondering if u can tell me how am i doing.
if anyone can critic these or give me pointers about the style or anything else i will be really glad.







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ToPeirA

[zap.br]

very nice style ..
i like the second one ....

but something in anathomy of your personages are
wrong .. i dont know

well is a very nice job ...
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[dontfallin]

in the second one the couple looks like they want to get it on and the little handicapped kid is in the wrong place at the wrong time......how perverted

[paranoid?]

oh man....enlightment is bad Dontfallin, now I can't look at the second picture without cracking up O_o

I think they are pretty good in overall, but yeah....can't put my finger on it about the anatomy. But I did notice something in the first one that I couldn't take my eyes off, looks like the guy's right cheek is stretching somehow....

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damn....I tell you, everytime I look at the second one now, I feel like I'm at the wrong place too O_O;
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[topeira]

thanks a lot... now even I can't look at the second one without giggling...

i looked twice and three times and still can't seem to find anatomy errors. usually im OK with anatomy.

can u be more specific about what is anatomicly wrong?

any other crits??
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[SolarC]

I like the second one and mostly the kid in it. He seems to have more persona than the others in my opinion. As crits the cast shadows doesn't seem to match direction of the light. Light in the figures as well seems to be quite loosely rendered, but that doesn't really bother my eye. Those cast shadows are hard to do in the photoshop when you can't use a ruler.