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Finer · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 1:53 pm

Just finished this, I posted a work inprogress some time ago but it ended up looking alot different.
Painted in photoshop 7

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Ghandaiah · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:04 pm

Only thing I can think of is that the demon's left arm looks strangely shorter than his right, but I don't think I'm in any position to crit this one. Shocked

Love the lighting, love the detail, love the guy in the foreground... Most excellent... Most excellent indeed... Surprised

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aColdOldKodiak · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:14 pm

That's awsome Very Happy

only thing is the fire blade isn't too convincing.
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Malachi Maloney · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:21 pm

I totally agree with the arm crit, other than that I really like it.

The lighting is very nice. Smile

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oDD · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:14 pm

incredible. love the mood of the picture, and how it's telling the story. Yeah theres something wrong with hand and i think it woud look better if the demon was looking at that dude, but maybe its just me.
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jr · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 7:09 pm

lookin good as usual.
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Capt. Fred · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 12:11 am

oDD: the first thing I though about in the first five seconds was that the big wasn't looking at the lil' guy, so it's not just you. It would be cool if he did lookat him.

Awesome pic though. Correct those points people've mentioned and cool! It looks like yu've tried to cram his whole left arm (our right) onto the canvas rather than just letting it go out of the bounds...

Aweome though!

Simoom · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 12:42 am

My Groin is on fire!!!!

Pretty hot stuff (oh ho ho I am an unstoppable barrage of comedy tonight), but anyways, The lighting is awesome and the muscle on the demon burning crotch beast are excellent. I kinda wonder if the fire of the sword is too precise, but I don't know if its meant ot be burning or some kind of glowing fire shaped crystal/rock.

marc_taro · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 6:03 am

Lighting here is excellent...great contrast, nice silhouetted (spelling?) guy too...some small roughness about the foreshortenting on the demons' arms...some photo ref might help - I really like the way the evil mess-o crablegs is fading into the light...I might have made the rest of him a bit less 'normal' what with his lower body being so alien...but it's cool anyway...rock textures on ground are cool too...

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Max · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 8:51 am

Is it just me or doesn't that creatur look at the warrior?
Other than that your concept is breathtaking.
The light, texture and stuff is excellently done.
And especially the warrior at the bottom is great.
Did you use reference oin this one?
If yes, you used it very wisely.

Great pice of work...well as always.
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Finer · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 12:53 pm

Thanks for the suggestions Smile

Fixed the eyes, flames and the let the arm go outside.

Max Kulich: No, I didnt use reference. I want a digital camera... Sad

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Malachi Maloney · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 3:43 pm

Looks a lot better. Smile

The fire sword still isn't totally believable, but overall it's a nice piece.

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bellie · Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 2:33 am

is this the one that started off witht he archer? wow its come a very long way. i love it. just the previous comment about the fireblade.