[xmmx]

C&C if you will


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[Simoom]

Needs more dramatic lighting to me it seems, not neccessarily night time like you were mentioning, but more shadows etc, it would also probably cure the problem that it looks a little flat. The anatomy and foreshortening are both good, and the coloring is too, I'd just got with my previous suggestion. nice concept though (well, not so nice concept, but you get the idea)

[R3skeEn]

This concept is great, and the picture is good but like simoon said it could need some more shadows and highlights ...

[AndyT]

I thought there'd be another update in WIP ...

I like it. Just something about the light ... where does it come from?
Directly from above as the shadow of her leg suggests?
Then her left side wouldn't be that dark I guess. If you want to make it look as if it's lit from the left then you'd have to fix the leg-shadow
... and the wall would be lit complete different I guess. The wall looks as if it's lit from above and right.
(My English sucks)
Maybe I'm completely wrong, I'll have to look at it later again.

Guess you know where the light source should be. Then you should be able to figure out where to add highlights and shadows. If you think it doesn't look better then just leave it as it is.

And the dark gray in the background ... what's that supposed to be? Smoke?

[zap.br]

i agree w the others comments
and i say if it more dark u can
make more emmotional ..

allways the darkness is the simbolic representation of
fear, pain and bad fellings ..
every elements in a war
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[xmmx]

Thanks for the comments guys

Zap.br; the reason I chose to go with a day scene Is because the nigh scene seemed overdone for this type of image

AndyT actually there is a lot of changes between this one and the last one in the WIP thread mainly the colors and BG where messed with a lot.
As for the light it was supposed to come from above and a little to the left, �supposed� is the key word here lol, anyway thanks for the comment

R3skeEn; most likely right

Simoon; thanks man
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[AndyT]

That makes sense. Just her left side shouldn't be that dark then I guess.
I noticed that you worked on it a lot. I just didn't think the next step would be the final stage already...

Btw. what about the smoke (is it smoke?)

I think it's great as it is now. Definitely not a same old, same old kind of image.
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[Matthew]

yup Mrx, I totally dig the clothing on her.
Good work.

Matthew

[xmmx]

AndyT yeah now that i look at it i might have gone to dark with the shadow, ohh well, and yeah it's smoke

mattl; thanks man
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