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PawelLipka_
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 8:27 am     Reply with quote
this time i used much looser technique.
tell me what You think:)




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PostPosted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 8:43 am     Reply with quote
Looking good! The colours come together a bit more on this one (the other one was great though).

I'd love to see a portrait or a nude by you, post more!

cheers,
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 9:08 am     Reply with quote
Looks great but the composition, namely the large dark lower right corner, seems to be off; that corner is a bit distracting; it could be seen as working, because the vertical and horizontal lines draw the eye up and away and then across, but it seems somewhat heavy to the lower right. Aside from that I think it's great!
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PawelLipka_
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 4:51 pm     Reply with quote
Tom: i already changed it a little.
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