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Timon · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 4:14 am

Hi guys , I�m on my second picture with my wacom pad.
The suit will be more detailed. the background . hm i maybe do a mine or a cave.

Timon

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Matthew · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 5:11 am

Nice stuff, Is it difficult to draw with a wacom? I�ve never tried.
Can you see what you are drawing on the wacom�s screen, or only in Photoshop?

take it easy
Matthew

the_insider · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 5:43 am

hmm...i dont really know what to say---i think you should not really focus on making a piece like this yet and rather sketching out simpler things to get some proportions and such right----jees, ive said that soo many times!

if i had to say something about it...to name a few--the arm is too short..you really confused me with the repeated complimentary colors--red and green,,,and the tube going to the oxygen tank is not circular at all---it looks like you were using a lot of airbrush also---

MATTHEW---i always thought you had a wacom---no you cant see what you draw on the wacom--instead you just see it on the screen---it's like a pen mouse E)
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B0b · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 6:16 am

if you get the pen stylus then you can see on the paper you draw on , but this costs extra $$$ and doesn't come as standard

Godwin · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 6:48 am

that doesnt look like tiberium to me....

and work on ur body form, its not too good

and why did u get a wacom? i suppose u gotta draw well, with a pencil, in order to use the wacom well, but hey, i dont have one 0_o, just wished i had one
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Timon · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 9:37 am

the_insider : The left arm is not to short , its the perspektive ... The arm is arcuate downward.
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Inspector Lee · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 11:14 am

Wether the arm is the right length or not, it looks wierd (like it's detached from his body or something). Insider is right, you really need to work on learning anatomy before you attempt a whole illustration.
There is a lot of very talented people on this forum. You can learn a lot (for free I might add) if you don't try to defend your work. The artists I've seen improve the most are the one's who seek out criticism, and take every critique as an opportunity to learn.
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Timon · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 3:55 pm

Inspector Lee

its ok , criticism is like helping. dont stop =)
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Godwin · Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 7:04 pm

been working on it?

u should work on the piece of tiberium, anyway, the tanks he's carrying are too far away from the body, move them more the the left, and work ont he tube, it looks like it flattens out halfway, u may want to move the tiberium, along with his arms/hands to directly below his face, but still holding it far away(it IS a dangerous substance) i think thats all, cant say more without seeing more

btw, what are u basing this on? which game title?
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Timon · Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 5:29 am

only a little update ... Now im starting the Background hm its very difficult

http://geocities.com/gfxdaten/tiberium2flasche.JPG

sorry , you have to copy the link

damn geocities Confused

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