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PostPosted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 3:34 pm     Reply with quote
well im making a logo for a local rap group named 'truth' and i don't regularly post these kind of things but i wanted to get some more opinions--they're pretty simple but let me know--


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 3:46 pm     Reply with quote
They are both cool, would be nice to see the last one with the green background, I think that will do the trick.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 4:53 am     Reply with quote
The second one looks great!

Does this group have any songs on the net? I'm a huge underground hiphop fan, and I would love to hear some of thier music.

Good luck!
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 8:21 am     Reply with quote
simple it best. i like the first one. the green flair works well. maybe a rusted metal version would be kinda cool.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 11:52 am     Reply with quote
I'm with Jami, the first one is much better.
Have you tried bringing the letters a bit closer together?
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 12:37 pm     Reply with quote
second one is without a doubt better... bringing the letter closers together would be great.

m... keep in mind that design and art should be more seperate. I think the majority of people like logos that are clean (like vector art) .. yet simple and innovative.

ie, cingular, att, compaq, etc.

Think it would be better if you changed the shade of green in the second one. to a more.. military camo green - looks a little murky
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 4:16 pm     Reply with quote
yea it's kinda my first time doing this design type art---but umm the rap group is actually hehheh.....me and my friend's-- but i just wanted to get honest opinions...at least i THOUGHT it woulda helped...stupid of me--yea i have a version of the letters closer together but for "design" purposes i thought it'd the wise thing to do them separate--i think you're right TOYLET, it should be more clean---

and no we don't have anything online BUT we are making a CD that will be out soon---probably by the beginning of 2003,...BTW we're not just doing this as a little basement pastime---that's what many think....we're really serious about it
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 4:24 pm     Reply with quote
mmm.... thats sounding a little harsh towards me.... is there something i'm missing?
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 4:32 pm     Reply with quote
hehheh no no what i meant was i thought if i said it wasn't my group people would give me more honest opinions but that was stupid of me because i know that people give good opinions anyway---TOYLET i told you,..you're my big brother heh
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