[Kari Christensen]

This is a collaboration between my wife and I for an illo for a ccg card. I want to shake up my style a bit. Make things more messed up. C&C visciously. .

[marc_taro]

Very nice work. I like the style.

Very quick crits:
Moon might be too close to edge. Cropped off, or behind dagger might be cool

Angular syle is nice but Hair looks a bit stiff.

Not sure if the yellow is too saturated. Brings my eye to the bottom. Like the darkness at the top, but might need more dark or less chroma at bottom.

But these are not large problems overall..
marc

[Max]

I see you like this kind of pose !
Nicely done !

[Kari Christensen]

Thanks Marc. You do great stuff, I might have told you that before but I don't remember. I want a mutated telephone T.

Yeah the cropping on the moon is bad. I was trying to fit it in because cresent moons are cool but I think I'll just axe it off. Good point about the yellow too. I'm going to go in Painter and smooth out the lines and render out some forms like the hair so they look less flat and stiff. Thanks for the great input.

Thanks Max. Unfortueately, this is a second go on the first painting,but hopefully a better direction. The sketch has been approved so I'm trying to stick with it as much as possible for the final. Poor art directors, my style changes every week. . . heh heh.

[antx]

Nice. I like it too. It reminds me of Brom�s "blood ritual".

[Phb]

hi kari, it's always a pleasure see something from you..

nice work...