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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2002 4:44 pm |
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Hi.
Painted this in Photoshop 7.0 using my wacom. Does it look okey ? And yes! i used a photo on me as reference....=)
pls give me comments...
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2002 6:36 pm |
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i dont understand.. why arent nobody giving me some feedback ? is it not good enough ? |
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J. Der junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Aug 2002 Posts: 27 Location: Montreal, Canada
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2002 7:01 pm |
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Jesus H Christ...That is fantastic!
Mind if I ask how long it took you? The detail is absolutely UNBELIEVABLE.
-JD |
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Nimr0d member
Member # Joined: 26 Sep 2002 Posts: 81 Location: Somewhere in Space
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2002 8:06 pm |
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Yes, you have a very clean style; it looks almost like a 3d render (especially the facial features and modelling). All I can say is, keep it up and draw every day, you're on the right track. |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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AndyT member
Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2002 Posts: 1545 Location: Germany
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 3:36 am |
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The link doesn't work. There's the folder with the pictures ... but I don't think that's the link you wanted to show!? |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 4:35 am |
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yes its the link i wanted to show. there are 22 steps shown there. just press the images.. |
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Shikome junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Sep 2002 Posts: 39 Location: Stockholm-Sweden
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 7:07 am |
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Christ on a bike... awsome!!
Did you use a filter (sandstone texture) to get the poars (spelling?) in the face ? |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 8:38 am |
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yes i used a filter.. "Reticulation" then i changed the Hue on it... and some opacity fixes.. then i used the Erase tool in diffrent areas.. and diffrent opacity... =) i hope u get it =)
and thnx =) |
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Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 10:15 am |
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that is a beautifully rendered piece. If there's anything to crit I'd say that perhaps the face portion of the head seems elongated. Aside from that anatomical issue, the quality of rendering is superb. It's difficult distinguishing this from a 3d render |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 12:45 pm |
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here is the photo i used as reference..
maybe it helps to give crit. =)
thnx for the rep. |
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Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 12:51 pm |
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ah, so it's cropping off the top of your head, and I think that's what I'm noticing. It looks like the top of the head is just too flat in your rendering |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 5:46 pm |
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tottaly: maybe u are right.. well.. il look into it later.. thnx for the tip. |
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Torstein Nordstrand member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2002 Posts: 487 Location: Norway
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Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 6:09 pm |
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Hi there, Joacim!
Since the photo is distorted, the top of the head looks small, and the jaw is super-huge. To avoid distortion, I think you should place the camera as far away as you can, and then zoom. I could be wrong, though. The textures you've done look very good, glassy eyes, etc. On accuracy, there's no point in critiquing, since you traced the picture. I would have appreciated it if you showed me that step as well. Overall, it looks good. Use a mirror the next itme  |
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