[Max E. Tormer]

hey Siyaan here u gave me the idea so it is fare that i mencion it,
so any critics any one wanna make are wellcome, i spent some time in this one and i would really like to know my mistakes to improve, so here it is check out my work:


greeting card link

if the red x does no make it�s apereance (if the web-spider does not gets it)
here it is the picture; any way there is link to it above.

[Max E. Tormer]

is it that bad or that good that no one critics it? i am not mad at all
it is just that i wanted some feed back.