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n8
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 Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 9:23 am |
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hey all...need urgent feedback on this ...kinda last minute assesment kinda thing...hehe..theres a tabloid article on "the invisible rich" and we were supposed to illustrate somethin for it...so here it is...i crits and comments essential...if u dont im in deep poo 
hope i can count on the forums once agen
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kana
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| Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 9:39 am |
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| they look pretty visible to me. |
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Rae Maxwell
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| Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 2:28 pm |
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Pretty good job, but one thing I notice is that the lines on the yellow-shirted man look out of place since everything else is lineless. You could also work on making you woman's head look a little less like a balloon.
It's cute, you make me want to read that article. |
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n8
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| Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 7:25 pm |
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lol..thats a woman??...hehehehe...the idea behind the lines was that he was one type of rich that wanted to stand out...ill try reduce the lines a little see what happens..thanks for the crit...ill fix up that "woman" for ya  |
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Arc][Pello
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| Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 7:39 pm |
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| he stands out without the black lines, look at his mouth full of teeth and that bright yellow shirt!!!! |
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