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DSD-GINO
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2002 1:20 pm     Reply with quote
Long time no posts , I was not even sure to post this ....
Anyway.. I drew a pic of a junky but it didn't turn out well..
When do I draw junkies? well I decided to photoshop it and make something out of it.
I know the pic looks rushed experimenting here
Well be the judge..

C&C always welcome..
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DSD-GINO
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2002 1:22 pm     Reply with quote
yes.. You can see I never post stuff.. I forgot to ADD THE PICTURE..
ok here it is.

SubWay Junky!
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Loxley
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2002 1:24 pm     Reply with quote
Thats pretty good. I dig the cyberpunk scene. Do more.

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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2002 2:08 pm     Reply with quote
wow... love the intensness of this picture... great stuff.
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Molako_Plus
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2002 6:13 pm     Reply with quote
im not sure her eye is in the right play...

other than that u might aswell change yur name to busdriver cuz you basically drove my ass to school

great job and keep it up!
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cptoonz
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 05, 2002 7:08 pm     Reply with quote
Hi,

I really like the perspective, lighting, and rendering...obviously, the girl has some issues. Interestingly, my eye is drawn to the right, and just now I notice the figure partially hidden by the girl...interesting stuff, but it is a little confusing compositionally (I am not a qualified critic, in this regard...I have compositional issues, myself) but perhaps a little more emphasis on these areas to tell us what's going on? Just a thought. Her eye does appear a little small, and her left hand seems small compared to her right hand holding the blade. Great work, overall, keep it up
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Max
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2002 5:02 am     Reply with quote
I love these bright lights in your picture.
Good job.
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Frost
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2002 5:05 am     Reply with quote
I believe that bright lights are best shown through high saturation around the over-exposed areas. Right now the saturation level is turning more towards greyscale. (In essence, this is why the "dodge" tool/filter looks so right and bright). Nice drawing, I like it.

[edited a nasty typo..]

[ September 06, 2002: Message edited by: Frost ]
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Freddio
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2002 5:24 am     Reply with quote
that is awesome dude...

sweet..
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-DsD-GiNo-
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2002 5:55 am     Reply with quote
Guys thanx for the motivation..

I am really practicing on this and every suggestion comment helps me.
especially frost with his theory
I will improve all what you said in my next piece.

Ok something I need to tell
The girl is actually a fagget boy-junky..
yes he looks so good you almost would think it's a girl right
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