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Peacekid junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2001 Posts: 15 Location: Geneva, Switzerland
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Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 10:48 am |
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Hi,
3rd drawing with Photoshop. Please help me to improve.
tks
[ June 12, 2002: Message edited by: Peacekid ] |
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Godwin member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2002 Posts: 701 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 10:55 am |
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hmmm wow, first thing that struck me was the chrome, very nice
some stuff to improve could be the words ont he container, maybe set them to 'overlay'?
and the shadow i think, the middle row of wheels look wierd, i dunno exactly why, i think its the shadow
and is this mouse work or did u use a tablet? |
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Peacekid junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2001 Posts: 15 Location: Geneva, Switzerland
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Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 8:27 pm |
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Thanks for your help.
Yes, 100% mouse-drawn. |
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Vhy member
Member # Joined: 04 May 2002 Posts: 101
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Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 9:49 pm |
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small changes: made paint more reflective in some spots. Paint tends to reflect more as its facing away from you. Tried to make the shadow areas cooler in color. The lettering on the side now doesn't look so bright.
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francmidi member
Member # Joined: 25 Feb 2002 Posts: 107 Location: Germany
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Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2002 2:07 am |
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Nice colors and chrome-effects. But it seems to me, that there is a problem with the vanishing points. The wheel in the middle looks, as if it doesn't stand on the ground.
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