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Axl
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Location: London, England

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2002 9:57 am     Reply with quote
This piece took about a week to do mostly because I re-done it about 3 times. Now it's finally done and I'm pleased with it.
Crits and comments are welcome, let me know what you think.
Thanks.
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PixelPeZ
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Joined: 16 Apr 2002
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Location: Tallinn, Estonia

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2002 10:50 am     Reply with quote
remember that the eyes should be placed vertically in the middle of the head. and perhaps you should have a more defined light source ... it would give you a chance to play around with the shadows a bit more aswell.

but nice colours and impression though.
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Jujube
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Joined: 18 Apr 2002
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2002 12:29 pm     Reply with quote
It's beautiful! (^ ^)
I love the coloring, tattoos and her lips XD
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HawkOne
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Location: Norway / Malaysia

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2002 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
If looks could kill ....

Facial / cranial anatomy is a little off / skewed if you were going for realism ... but if you weren't, then that chick is one gorgeous wide eyed, gold-tattoed angry chick ...

Nice ...
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Hunago
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 6:04 am     Reply with quote
Gosh, it's sweet. I like the skin colour a lot, and the eyes just grabs you.

I think the ear should have an inner ridge.. might look up a photo for reference.
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 9:04 am     Reply with quote
the colors are really amazing.. great work.

the head structure is off... but I think it could be forgiven.. its a good pic.
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Axl
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 9:46 am     Reply with quote
Thanks everyone, your comments are much appreciated.
I'm learning with every new piece, hopefully getting a little better and learning from the comments received.
Thanks again.
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