[iByrn]

http://www.angelfire.com/emo/iorek/images/sketch.jpg

Some quick sketches I made for a possible comic, or maybe I was just bored, you'll never know.
I see some problems, mainly with the girl in the upper right. Something doesn't look quite right about her.
Please gimme some suggestions! I'll prolly post more of my sketches in this same thread later.

(ps-I kinda try to stay away from the anime look but it's apparent, no?)

[Kaete]

I like the bald fellow. He looks really interesting.

I think the problem wiht the girl with her hair. It looks like she hasn't combed it for a few weeks.

[iByrn]

I was thinking more that her face is misshapen somehow, anyone else notice this?

Here's another sketch. It's of my hand.
www.angelfire.com/emo/iorek/images/handweb.jpg