| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "Faery" |
Mindsiphon
member
Member #
Joined: 24 Mar 2001
Posts: 446
Location: Nashua, NH
|
 Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2002 1:57 am |
 |
 |
Did this for a request.
It's a different subject than what I usually do. I was a nice break from the monsters and dark themes I usually do.
c&c is more than welcome!
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
Jezebel
member
Member #
Joined: 02 Nov 2000
Posts: 1940
Location: Mesquite, TX, US
|
| Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2002 2:05 am |
|
|
That background is absolutely stunning... O_O
I think I would like to see her wings a little more... hmm... luminescent perhaps? Right now they are a little flat. 
PRetty picture! |
|
| Back to top |
|
Mindsiphon
member
Member #
Joined: 24 Mar 2001
Posts: 446
Location: Nashua, NH
|
| Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2002 2:23 am |
|
|
Thanks
The wings were bothering me as there was little contrast with them and the background.
I tried giving the wings a hint of color and that made them stand out more but I couldn't agree upon a color. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Jezebel
member
Member #
Joined: 02 Nov 2000
Posts: 1940
Location: Mesquite, TX, US
|
|
| Back to top |
|
Mindsiphon
member
Member #
Joined: 24 Mar 2001
Posts: 446
Location: Nashua, NH
|
| Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2002 2:36 am |
|
|
| Cool! Thanks! |
|
| Back to top |
|
jome
member
Member #
Joined: 02 Jan 2002
Posts: 145
Location: Antwerp
|
| Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 1:05 pm |
|
|
It's not one of those average faeries we get to see here on a regular basis. And the background is sheer brilliance. I l�ve the background. I would've tried to pull the lady back into the flora a bit, surrounding her with flowers or foliage or something.
But that's not a critique, rather a thought. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Benji Schupp
junior member
Member #
Joined: 07 Sep 2001
Posts: 32
Location: L.A. USA
|
| Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 2:18 pm |
|
|
Nice pic. However, the thing that bothers me is her stomach area. It looks like a tree trunk - or a cylinder. Around her belly button you could hint a little indention, where the rectus abdonminis end. Her external oblique (flank pads above the illiac crest - eh, top of hip bone) should be visible and don't forget to hint where her rib cage ends. You show some serious skills and it woudl be a pitty if you didn't fix those things.
Benji |
|
| Back to top |
|
mythwarden
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Feb 2002
Posts: 124
|
| Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 5:27 pm |
|
|
-Raist
This is a beautiful picture. I love the background a lot. You have very cool work, I checked out your website.
Forgive the nudity. I felt it necessary to show her figure in the pose you have her so that you can see what's going on.
I'm renowned to get the pose wrong and have someone else point it out. Look at "Kira" she's a perfect example of miss-proportions. But I like her as is...So you may want to keep what you have here as is too.
It's beautiful. Nice work. ;-)
-myth
Here's the image-
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
Mindsiphon
member
Member #
Joined: 24 Mar 2001
Posts: 446
Location: Nashua, NH
|
| Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 12:24 am |
|
|
*bump*
Interested in some feedback.
Thanks! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
